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Just looking at your first sentence:
InfraBayesianism is an extension of Bayesian reasoning that allows for more flexible modeling and reasoning under uncertainty developped by Vanessa Kosoy and Alex Appel.
“InfraBayesianism is” – this is probably missing a hyphen?
“an extension of Bayesian reasoning” — I can imagine that one -ism can be an extension of another -ism, I am already unsure how one reasoning can be an extension of another reasoning, but I don’t think it type-checks to say that some -ism is an extension of some reasoning?
“reasoning under uncertainty developped by Vanessa Kosoy” — this sounds like Kosoy et al. developed an uncertainty. You probably want to move that attribution to the beginning of the sentence, instead.
There is a long tradition for how to cite efficiently in scientific text, you could try a standard such approach like:
“Infra-Bayesianism [Kosoy & Appel (2020)] is an extension…”
(and are you sure you want to move them out of alphabetical order?)
“developped” — misspelled
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